Comments on: essay on childhood obesity??? long essay, please be willing to read, need help? http://www.whatsbrewin.com/home-brewing-supplies/essay-on-childhood-obesity-long-essay-please-be-willing-to-read-need-help The Seriously Fun Business of Home Brewing Fri, 12 Mar 2010 23:34:59 -0600 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: Violet http://www.whatsbrewin.com/home-brewing-supplies/essay-on-childhood-obesity-long-essay-please-be-willing-to-read-need-help/comment-page-1#comment-1558 Violet Tue, 26 Jan 2010 13:05:59 +0000 http://www.whatsbrewin.com/home-brewing-supplies/essay-on-childhood-obesity-long-essay-please-be-willing-to-read-need-help#comment-1558 Good essay, nice use of statistics and studies. I can't say much except maybe you should look further into the other reasons behind obesity, as in not pre-exisiting health conditions or the familt. Responsibility of marketers? Busy lifestyle? Pressure on children to grow up faster (there have been studies to show that children are growing up faster than ever before) all of these things could be factors, and i'm sure there are more. What is your essay attempting to address? Knowing this would help people make more accurate and informed criticisms of your work. Also, the essay isn't that long! People are just too lazy to read!<br><b>References : </b><br> Good essay, nice use of statistics and studies. I can’t say much except maybe you should look further into the other reasons behind obesity, as in not pre-exisiting health conditions or the familt. Responsibility of marketers? Busy lifestyle? Pressure on children to grow up faster (there have been studies to show that children are growing up faster than ever before) all of these things could be factors, and i’m sure there are more.

What is your essay attempting to address? Knowing this would help people make more accurate and informed criticisms of your work. Also, the essay isn’t that long! People are just too lazy to read!
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